Tales of Springfield 6
Added 2017-08-04 03:00:01 +0000 UTCIn the Saga I adopted a rule of not using thought bubbles. I would never reveal this much of Zandar's inner monologue now.
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However there IS something inherently wrong with a comic book entitled "The Inedible Husk"
2017-08-04 05:06:50 +0000 UTCThe Saga rules work well... maybe because we accumulate a history of watching her act & react in so many situations. But these views inside her thoughts were useful here. A quick way to show how she classifies those she meets. The thought balloons almost have to be a translation. If she has this organized a commentary to herself as she gets information, it might make her vulnerable to someone who could 'hear' the unspoken conversation.
KenFletcher
2017-08-04 04:26:29 +0000 UTCfar be it from me to tell a creative how to tell there stories. but as a whole I think absolutes isnt a good thing. Anything can be overused or used as a story crutch. Theres nothing inherently wrong with an occasional thought bubble.
Rick2tails
2017-08-04 03:37:58 +0000 UTC
