Hello~
I improved the beach comic, which is much better. I added some details on pages 1, 6 and 7 and modified page 9 to make it more visceral. I added three pages for the high school girls to end on something funnier.
Oh, on page 7, the girl has a toe ring that's going to burst under the pressure of the transformation. I forgot to save the file, but that detail will be there.
Tell me what you think! Thanks!
Melfur
2025-08-17 18:44:57 +0000 UTCZobbie
2025-08-17 15:46:44 +0000 UTCAverage Hilichurl
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