Naughty trio WIP ( basic flat coloring )

I LOVE the one of the person being sucked off of the nipple :-D

cousarmy0001

Hehe thank you ;) I'll do my best to deliver really nice pages for this one :3

Karbo

Thank you :D

Karbo

Fantastic job as expected. Im loving that you're incorporating more digestion related content into your work; cant wait to see this finished!

Aside from the delightfully sexy content and subject matter, I have to say it's also really fascinating to peek in at your creative process here, and see the project at various stages like this. In any case, I'm loving just about everything about this, and am very much looking forward to how it all comes together! :3

PrinnyDood

that's gonna be awesome

Turboman500

Thank you :) It's an interesting point you're raising here ^^ I feel having some darker bits like that just make a vore scene more striking in the end :3

Karbo

hahaha XD Thank you, I'm glad you liked it ^_^ for the others two bellies, I'm sure there will be others occasions ;3

Karbo

I'm noting your remarks here :3 And glad you like it ;P

Karbo

There's still some work to be done indeed but I like where this is going :-) . The artstyle of "Dungeon and Fairies" will really be a perfect fit here I think and make the overall outcome all the more incredible once it's complete ^_^. Only things that could still be added after taking yet another look at it are some small details in the scenery (more trees or some old buildings are always good :3 ) which really point out that Vivian, Malika and Melany are indeed giant and not human sized beings who could have just shrunken down their unfortunate catches. Also more "gurgle" , "groan" and "rumble" sounds on the stomaches of the three beauties (especially Melany on the last pages) can also never be wrong. Last but not least (although I imagine it's not that easy to get that look just right due to the eagle eye view) the humans on the first panels of pages 1 and 2 still look a little too small to me when compared to their pretty captors. Apart from that nothing to complain and really looking forward to the next update. You've really done an outstanding job in such a short amount of time so far Karbo *three thumbs up* ;-) .

JohnboyX

Wow, it's amazing! I agree with Jester - that part near the end is dark - but powerful [ please don't change it lol ]. It really juxtaposes with the the events going on outside! I think this is going to turn out to be crazy good! If anything, im shocked you didn't show what was happening in the other two bellies :P.I'm sure our two naga ladies were busy "entertaining" their guests lol. Seriously though - for something this short [ compared to the bigger manga of course ] to be so good, in such a shorter amount of time is proof positive of your improvement. Now all we need is for someone in the anime field to pick it up and make and anime out of things lol.

turboman500

I really like it so far, and as for the prey, I really like how they're mostly female, especially the last one. I know there's probably a lot of fans who prefer male prey, but female vore is so uncommon in traditional media that I want as much as I can get, so I hope you keep it as it currently is. I love the expressions on the last human, especially when seeing the puddle of her digested friends. That's an enticingly dark touch that seems like a bit of a step outside of your normal comfort zone, though I could already see some progression into darker territory in "A Princess's Duty". I know you're not fond of graphic digestion (neither am I, though I'd love to see the prey wind up in the intestines somehow), and I think this is a happy medium. Overall I'm very impressed and very excited!

Enigmatic Jester

ah no you are totally right, it's my bad ^^;

Karbo

I could be wrong, but when a victim says "a...teeth?" , shouldn't she say "a ... tooth?" ? Maybe i see a singular where you see a plural...

nostromo