Lana Lang comic part 2.
Added 2024-02-11 16:50:00 +0000 UTCThe conclusion to part 1.
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I see! Any particular page you feel is difficult to read? I ask because I did take into account the color of text in contrast to background and added a black outline to the text to make it pop out more. I myself dont have any problem reading it but maybe its because I already know what it says? Also, if you dont mind me asking, do you open the image in a new tab and zoom in, or read it as is on the patreon? I take it for granted everyone opens the image on a new tab and zoom in, otherwise it is definetely hard to read because its small.
Edit_the_editor
2024-03-25 15:59:43 +0000 UTCNormally I wouldn't nitpick such minor details for someone who is editing the assets provided by gunsmoke games, adding text and sharing most of it for free on F95. However, since you have a Patreon and are collecting money, no matter how little, for your edits. I am going to hold you to a higher standard and say that your earlier comics could use some work with legibility. I appreciate the color coding for the diff characters, but you have to consider the contrast with the background. Occasionally, the colors are too similar causing difficulty reading the text. I recommend sticking to bright/saturated colors for the character texts (even if it becomes less accurate to the character's color palette) and dark/dull colors for backgrounds to improve the legibility, or adding shadows to the text. That said your latest comic uses more images, less text and introduces speech bubbles, thus eliminating the issue so good job on that.
Lynx
2024-03-24 17:45:31 +0000 UTCOutstanding work!
Michael
2024-02-11 16:50:57 +0000 UTC
