Blitz - Chapter Six
Added 2019-03-20 20:19:58 +0000 UTCAlright, guys, new chapter time! This one should be a nice break from the typical doom and gloom that this story has brought so far, personally I had a lot of fun on it. So much actually that I'm already tearing through chapter seven. Hooray!
Also, you can thank my girlfriend for getting this one out early. I just wanted to watch the Goofy Movie but she wouldn't shut up until I posted it, so here you go.
Comments
I really felt for Trent in this chapter. How awkward he and Bree were together and not being able to readily show affection to his daughter and seeing how comfortably she hold hands we ith Rebecca and thinking he wont have that with her. Regret seeping in that he isn't as close as he perhaps should be, due to his emotional state. But then cut to scene with Brad hugging him and we see Trent start to soften to admit he like the physical contact. Brilliant just brilliant writing. Blitz just gets better and better. I love it
Jane
2019-03-24 21:14:10 +0000 UTCWait, are we gonna get fluff? Am i gonna get to read sweet marshmellowy fluffy goodness? I cant tell you how excited I am regardless of which direction Trent decides to take us. But like no matter how mopey or melodramatic he is I love the concept of such a hardened kind of dude being thrown into a fluffy rom com with another guy. And like having to deal with all these new things on the fly, like his gay panic or his very real relationships. Its a lot of fun but hes also growing and you can see that. And while its a slow build you cant help but root for this guy who has such a hard time helping himself. As always damn good chapter so keep it coming!
Stray137
2019-03-21 01:29:34 +0000 UTCI absolutely love this. Can't really put into words exactly what it is. Maybe it's seeing myself in Trent and the changes I went through to liking myself. Maybe it's the idea that I'm reading a story that isn't about just lesbians but about the struggle human nature can be. Only thing I know for certain is I'm rambling and probably not making any sense. Lol. So I'll just say I can not wait for next chapter! Thank you Kenna.
AJ
2019-03-20 23:22:58 +0000 UTC
