Nerissa Ravencroft - Work in Progress
Added 2025-01-27 16:38:50 +0000 UTCIt has been 7 days so I have some updates for you. Just like the last piece, this piece will need another 2-3 days to complete. But this time please choose which version you want me to continue with.
The second one is my original idea to make Nerissa in the center and start to decorate our queen. The result will be similar to the Kafka piece. It took a long time and hard effort but you got a beautiful illustration in the end. But the lewd will be out of place for sure.
The first one is what I have just finished and fixed the piece so that it suits the situation the character is in. Nerissa and you are doing something under the table and Liz suddenly caught you red-handed. You can imagine another set that describes Liz self-pleasing herself or another set that 3P in office lady. If you like the idea, I will do it. Yeah, we are talking about another chaining sets idea here. What do you think?
I will need to get more references and fix the idea sketch to make it look better but basically it's like this.
Also, I would like to try making a small conversation although I am not good at it ( because I get embarrassed whenever writing it but I will try to make it to improve our quality lewd ).
This is from feedback I get from you guys. Thank you very much for showing me the way to serve you better.
Now it's time for work.
P/s: Another notice that I will erase the deadline so that I can focus on making lewd. Trying to make fast work took everything from me. Anyone who quit will also receive enough of the amount of reward they pledged. It's just I won't stress myself on the time matter because anything quality you want me to do, it took very much time. 3 sets a month may not be possible but I will try my best.
The most important thing is that I can entertain you guys with lewd settings. Sorry that i forgot it and being astray for too long.
I will see you soon ! Back to work !
- Hanada Yanochi
Comments
Looks like everyone loves this idea then it's my turn to shine. Thank you for the many suggestions you make. I just plan to make a small interview but now I also have an idea for some kind of promotion reward haha. Maybe I will make it in another OL setting then. Besides, I am glad that you have a thoughtful boss. It's always wonderful to work with great people like that. Good for you man. I hope your career will get better and better. Sorry that I can't reply too much because I am busy with work. I will come back when the set is ready.
花田やのち - Yanochi Hanada
2025-01-28 13:13:06 +0000 UTCIt's a footjob this time but I will try to make a handjob soon. Come to think of it, I haven't try to make a proper handjob for a long time. Maybe it's about time to test it again.
花田やのち - Yanochi Hanada
2025-01-28 13:07:52 +0000 UTCFirstly, oh my god OL Nerissa is so hot. I was stunned when I beheld her. Wow! As for your question, I think it would be fun to try a chaining set with the first idea. Making the setting part of the lewd scenario gives the lewd more context, which I would say...makes it more lewd? I feel like I said lewd too many times, but I think you get what I mean. It immerses you into the scene. I think both ideas are good and enjoyable in their own way, but I would vote for the first one based on our recent discussions about where to go next for your patrons. I think adding dialogue is a great idea. Dialogue can be tricky, even for dedicated writers, so don't be too hard on yourself; like everything else, it takes practice in order to improve. But I think the setting can help you out there, and just like the background, dialogue can add to the overall feeling and theme of the piece. I can already imagine different conversations based on the situation; is Nerissa interviewing us for a position? Being interviewed? Is a promotion being discussed? There's a lewd fantasy right there. Maybe Nerissa is a coworker, and we're on break. Lots of possibilities! Love the idea of Liz getting drawn in from afar or getting dragged into a 3P set. You could have people laid across the table doing stuff. I also think it could be fun if Liz was totally oblivious, like she comes over a little later to talk to you because Nerissa "left" but really Nerissa's under the table demonstrating her "oral skills." I think erasing the deadline is for the best. I like to think when it comes to most things that things take as long as they need to take. There's a saying I like that goes "slow is smooth and smooth is fast." When people rush things, they end up taking longer correcting mistakes or stopping to do things over properly. It's something I have to keep in mind too, because when you're under pressure from others or yourself it's natural to feel the urge to speed things up. Reminding myself that things take time helps me ignore that. I think the progress updates also help set people at ease even when there are delays. For example, at my kitchen jobs, I've noticed the waitstaff are more patient with me when it takes me longer to get them their food because I try to explain to them briefly why it's not ready yet and what I'm doing to get it finished. I think what bothers people most when it comes to waiting for anything is when they have no idea what's happening, or they can't tell if you even care. You make it very clear that you care, so there's no problem there. Of course, I also think the reputation you make for yourself helps with that too. As a patron, I think you're very reliable and you have a history of doing your best and being as consistent as you can with your work and keeping us up to date, even despite the chaos of life, so that also helps a lot. I know I trust you, so just do what you need to do and continue to take care of yourself as well! Thank you for the WIP! I hope you're feeling good and I wish you luck with finishing the rest!
Toastywafflz
2025-01-28 06:42:57 +0000 UTCOoo under the table blowjob/handjob?! Can't wait
Solo
2025-01-28 06:34:39 +0000 UTCThanks, this will take pretty much time but let me cook. Hope this new path will entertain you more than current works.
花田やのち - Yanochi Hanada
2025-01-28 03:03:07 +0000 UTCi definitely love the idea of say getting an under the table footjob from nerissa and elizabeth catching it and getting horny from watching and being reverse caught and brought in for a 3p
Chooie6
2025-01-28 01:42:10 +0000 UTC
