Nerissa Ravencroft - November - December 2024's Reward
Added 2025-02-04 15:20:02 +0000 UTCOkay, It nearly took forever but Nerissa's set is here. Actually it was done yesterday but writing dialogue and arranging files took more time than expected. This set has 34 variants, can you believe that ? This is even longer than the grand Hanabi set I made last month. But at least it's worth it, I hope you like the foot-job I made. Redrawing all those pics is really a nightmare to me. I will only make this when it's necessary and not touch this too often.
By the way, about writing dialogue for the set. I think it's best that I can only write the first part of each set when things are still interesting. Writing dialogue for all a 20 -30 variant set is pretty time taking and I don't think I can make it interesting with such length on each set. Around 3-5 variants have dialogue on each set should be suitable. For this set as an example I'm going to post all variants that have dialogue on Reward Preview post then you will know what i mean.
Hope you don't mind it !
About this piece, I have to remade the background idea again with proper research and reference so that it can look the best and make it easy to draw the next set for Elizabeth. As you see, I made everything as simple as possible and every piece from now on I will keep it simple as you advise.
That is it, I will see you guys next week with the Eliz set. To be continued !
- Hanada Yanochi
Comments
Thank you ! I will try to limit the number of variants from now on and make it more interesting. Writing dialogue is hard but it looks like you guys like it so I will try my best ! The background is this simple is good for making chaining sets. I will try to make the next one fit the previous scene so keeping everything balanced is important. Well, OL is the best, I really want to draw more office situations like this inthe future !
花田やのち - Yanochi Hanada
2025-02-05 01:16:31 +0000 UTCLook like making dialogue in each set was a good idea. It took more time on each piece and limited the number of variants but it was worth it ! I will try to make it more like this in chaining sets in the future. The background is this simple and fits the situation is enough right ? I think I know what I should focus on in the future's sets. Thank you for giving me ideas.
花田やのち - Yanochi Hanada
2025-02-05 01:12:11 +0000 UTCI love everything about this! The dialogue you added really makes the variations seem a lot more special and unique haha. Not to mention Nerrisa herself looks gorgeous in that office girl attire! The background is also very well made. Overall fantastic set! I'd love to see more dialogue for each variations given the chance.
Ultra
2025-02-04 20:25:12 +0000 UTCAhh, it's lovely! That really is a lot of variants. I think only doing dialogue for the first part makes sense, especially if it helps your workflow. You could also sprinkle it throughout the set if you didn't want to do it all at once, like some dialogue every 4 or 5 variants or so. But it also works to do it in the start, set things up and then let the scene play out accordingly. It probably depends on the scene. The background is lovely, I really like how the office space feels warm and vibrant with the lights and the plants, like the people who designed it wanted it to feel like a place you actually wanted to be in. I'm sure the offices here would be a selling point if Nerissa wasn't going the extra mile. Speaking of Nerissa, she's lovely. The variants you posted really show off her legs and feet. Stockings are always a nice touch. You did a good job with her feet too, I feel like feet are kind of like hands and they can be annoying or tough to deal with sometimes, but you did good capturing the way her feet arch and her toes curl. And I like the view in general. The situation focuses a bit more on her lower body but I find myself captivated by everything above the table as well. Maybe I'm weird, but I generally find normal clothing and uniforms and stuff like that sexier on women than stuff like lingerie, so the button down office shirt is very alluring, and her face is so expressive! I love the different facial expressions she makes as she teases you. This is an absolutely beautiful piece. Thank you for your hard work! Looking forward to the next part!
Toastywafflz
2025-02-04 18:54:57 +0000 UTC
