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Web of Aeons - Chapter 44: Advancement Part 2

The pain subsided with time, and even her burning crystal soul receded to a dull ache. Akari’s new body had healed the damage, and only the echoes remained in her mind. How much time had passed? Five minutes? An hour? She couldn’t say. But eventually, Thane and Relyn dropped their techniques and stepped back. Lena placed more devices on Akari’s chest, but her words sounded faint and distant as if they were deep underwater.

However, one word stood out above the rest, and it came like a breath of fresh air as they resurfaced.

“Success.”

She opened her eyes and stared up at the dojo’s wooden ceiling. The details were surprisingly sharp, considering she’d removed her glasses before they started. She’d spent some time training without them this year, but she hadn’t known those efforts would bear fruit.

Elend handed her the glasses a second later, and she placed them on her face. The world turned blurry at once, which meant she’d probably need a new prescription. 

Nice. Her new vision wasn’t perfect, but it was a huge improvement. It also meant she wouldn’t need to worry about ambushes at night, or opponents who tried to blind her in battle.

“How do you know it worked?” Kalden asked from his mat beside her.

Lena held up her mana watch. “This detects micro points. Both your numbers are rising as you cycle.”

Akari got to her feet, and no one told her to take it easy. Her legs practically launched her into the air, and she landed with perfect balance. Talek. She hadn’t felt this good in . . . well, ever. It was like she’d been living her life in an exhausted state, and had finally slept through the night.

All her senses came alive. She heard the breath in her nostrils, her heart beating in her chest and her hair brushing against her shoulders. She inhaled the dojo’s wooden scent, with undertones of mana from past battles. She felt the shifts in the air as everyone moved and spoke around her. 

It was almost too much. How was she supposed to focus when her brain took in everything at once?

Elend placed a hand on her shoulder. “Aye, it’s a lot for the first few days, but your brain will adapt. Then you can sharpen your senses at will.”

Akari nodded. Brains always took longer to adapt than physical bodies. It was the same reason your pain could linger for hours after you’d been healed.

Kalden got to his feet next, and Akari barely recognized him. He looked like he’d aged several years, with more prominent cheekbones, and a straighter jawline. His eyes looked more serious than before, and his beard looked like it might come in thicker if he stopped shaving. Akari’s eyes drifted downward, and all his muscles looked more defined, from his chest down to his abs. Akari wouldn’t mind doing a more thorough inspection in private.

Kalden grinned when he caught her staring. “You look good, too.”

“Really?” Akari felt at her jaw and cheekbones, but she couldn’t feel any changes with her bare hands. “Anyone have a mirror?”

That was probably a dumb question. Some dojos had mirrors, but that would ruin the whole log cabin aesthetic. And it wasn’t like anyone carried around a—

Elend snapped his fingers, and a full-length mirror appeared in front of her.

“Oh.” Akari took an instinctive step back, blinking at the dream mana Construct. “Thanks.” 

Then her eyes widened as she finally took in her reflection. Seeing herself without glasses was weird enough, but her facial structure had changed, too. Not as much as Kalden’s, but the change was there all the same. Everything looked leaner and more contoured, which was a welcome improvement. It was hard to look like a badass mana artist when you still had the face of a sixteen-year-old.

“The books never talk about this stuff,” Akari said as she touched her face. If anything, most people looked younger after their Artisan advancements.

“Aye.” Elend chuckled. “There’s a reason for that. Most people reach Artisan in their physical prime or older. No one does it in their teens.”

Huh. That would explain why Relia’s face hadn’t changed as much; she was already a few years older. Relia was also more conventionally attractive than either of them, so that probably helped.

They eventually thanked the Solidors and said their goodbyes. Akari had expected to swear a soul oath or something, but Relyn just waved that away. 

“I can tell your word is true,” she said. “We wouldn’t have done all of this if I didn’t trust you.”

That almost seemed too easy, but Relyn could apparently detect lies as well as any dream artist. And she was right, of course. Akari intended to honor their deal when the time came.

Thane nodded along with his wife. “Just don’t die before you reach the Mystic realm, and we’ll all be happy”

Akari let out a nervous laugh. “Wasn’t planning on it.”

And with that, the immortal Aeons stepped out of the room with Rosintar, leaving this world behind until further notice. It would have been nice to get some lessons—especially when it came to time mana. Time artists were far rarer than space artists, and good teachers were hard to come by. 

Still, Akari understood their reasons for leaving. The Mystics would all be hunting them, and nowhere on this planet was safe.

She and Kalden spent the next hour getting used to their Artisan bodies. It felt even better than she’d imagined. Her techniques formed so easily, as if she’d been shaping mist all her life, and now she finally had access to solid clay.  And the physical changes were even better. They raced through the forest at full speed, and neither of them broke a sweat after three miles. Akari detonated a grenade in her hands, and the explosion didn’t break her skin. It was like someone had cataloged all her weaknesses and fixed them all in a single, glorious moment. Which was, of course, exactly what the Artisan advancement did.

As for the Aeon powers . . . she had no idea how to test those. Relia had conjured a Moonshard barrier within seconds of her own advancement, but she was a special case. She came from an Aeon bloodline, and her grandmother had supposedly given her the technique during her aspecting ritual. 

Things would be harder for Akari and Kalden. In fact, Lena had spent years trying to make Moonshard, and she’d never succeeded. Oh well . . . maybe Relia could help them once they were together again. 

And yes, they would get Relia back, even if it meant defying a Mystic and fleeing this entire continent.

~~~

The sun hung low on the horizon when they joined the others in the main house. Akari hadn’t wanted to come inside, but Arturo had insisted, claiming that Relia would be on TV any minute. 

Several of the cultists had gathered around a massive screen and Arturo took his place on the sofa next to Zukan. On the screen, Ashur Moonfire stood in front of a large crowd of people, somewhere in downtown Koreldon City. A cluster of dark-clad mana artists surrounded him, with a web of mana binding their souls.

There was a short pause, then Moonfire’s voice filled the silence. "I, Ashur Moonfire, swear to faithfully serve as the Prime Minister of Espiria. I will defend our Charter of Rights, safeguard our sovereignty, and protect our borders with all my power. I swear it on my mana, and on my soul."

The web of power broke into pale mist, and a silver-haired man stepped forward. “It is done,” he said in a deep voice. “May the Angels smile upon you, Prime Minister Moonfire.”

The crowd cheered, from the Masters and Mystics who stood around him, to thousands more in the strret below. Moonfire waved at the crowd, then he stepped back to kiss his wife on the cheek. Relia stood nearby, wearing a formal black dress. They’d obviously forced her to be there, and she didn’t smile or pretend to be happy. 

Akari’s heart ached for her friend, but at least this proved she was alright. A part of her had feared that Relia’s parents would lock her away in some dark cell and never let her go outside.

Finally, Moonfire approached a dark blue podium, adorned with the prime minister’s seal of office. The camera shifted to reveal his face, while the Espirian flag blew in the wind behind him. The rubble of broken buildings filled the background, and the sky was still gray from the storm clouds

He stood tall and dignified as he spoke into the microphones. “Today, the world’s greatest city came under attack. Aeon cultists brought Storm’s Eye here. Here, into the heart of our great republic. They turned our city into their battlefield, and our civilians paid the price.” 

Moonfire pounded the podium as he spoke these words, and he almost looked sincere. “We lost many loved ones today, including my own daughter, Elise.” His eyes fell for a moment, then they hardened with new resolve. “As your Prime Minister, I am entrusted with the solemn duty to protect our lands and ensure the safety of every Espirian.” He pounded the podium again before raising his fist into the air. “Our response must be swift. We can no longer afford complacency in the wake of these new threats. Therefore, my first act will be a comprehensive security reform to safeguard our republic from further harm.”

Cheers erupted from the crowd.

“And I pledge to you, my fellow Espirians, I will find these cultists and bring them to justice. I will empower the state in all matters of surveillance, search, and seizure. I will strengthen our borders and ensure that Storm’s Eye never comes within a hundred miles of our land again.”

More cheers and applause.

“Thank you,” Moonfire said. “and may we stand strong together.”

Comments

Thanks. It helps so much! I have been so dense. Haha. It never occurred to me that Ashure was lyriana's own son, even after I learned that Relia was her granddaughter.....maybe because Ashure and Relia were so estranged, I kinda fooled myself into thinking that Relia was adopted or something, and that Ashure wasn't her real father. And as for the aeonica novels, yes I admit that I forgot a lot of the lore in that book. So it would help if you insert tidbits like this as explanations. It would be also helpful to those who didn't read the Aeonica novels and instead started with this series first.

Mohammed Mahedi Hasan

Here's the relevant explanation from Book 3, Chapter 47 that should answer most of the questions: “I know you’re an Aeon,” Elend said as he poured the drinks. “But you’re also a Mana Artist. You and Kalden have the same parents, so this couldn’t have happened naturally. And yet, no one’s walked away from the Aeon ritual without permanent damage. At least, that’s what I’ve heard.” He took a sip of his water and leaned forward. “I want to know how you did it.” “You heard right” Sozen glanced down at his lap, and a regretful smile touched the corners of his lips. “Lady Solidor did the ritual herself, but I didn’t walk away unscathed. I’m stuck at Artisan for life.” “Ah . . . I’m sorry.” Beyond that, no words came. What did you say to someone who’d reached the end of his path? All Mana Artists strode for immortality deep down. Few would ever reach such a lofty goal, but even fewer had their hopes so thoroughly crushed. “I’ve made my peace with it,” Sozen said, “even if it wasn’t easy. I’m helping to save my home.” “A worthy goal,” Elend agreed. Sozen sipped his own water, and his eyes went momentarily distant. “More than most people can say these days.” “So you were Lady Solidor’s test subject. She must be making progress, then. You wouldn’t have volunteered otherwise.” Sozen lowered his glass and looked up. “Is that your second question, Grandmaster?” Elend shook his head. “I want to know if the Solidors have perfected the ritual. And if they have, I’d like to know the requirements in broad strokes.” “They have the theory down,” he said after a short pause. “And they expect their next attempt to work. As for the requirements, I’m not at liberty to say.” “That’s alright.” Elend waved a hand. “I’m guessing it needs to happen during the Artisan advancement. If you’re any stronger, your body will reject the crystal. Any weaker, and you’ll suffer permanent damage.” “I can’t confirm or deny anything.” The lad tried to keep a straight face, but he wasn’t good enough to fool a Dream Artist. “I’m sure it’s more complicated than that,” Elend said. “You’d have to train with smaller crystals first. Artisan bodies can’t heal what they’ve never faced, right?” Sozen’s eyebrow twitched at that. This was probably the part they’d messed up during his own ritual. Too bad they hadn’t compared notes sooner, or Elend could have helped them. ___ The TL;DR is that every other mana artist who tried to become Aeons suffered permanent damage and couldn't advance any higher, but Akari and Kalden were the first real success story because they did the ritual at the right time, with the right training (Elend's pain machine from earlier in Book 4.) I'll keep in mind that it's confusing when I do my next draft of this book! I might be able to go over the explanation again / in a different way. As for Ashur Moonfire, he was born as a mana artist / Aeon (his mother was Lyraina Trelian) so he never had to go through the ritual in the first place. Relia was also born as an Aeon, but her Aeon soul manifested as krustoplegia instead. I honestly don't remember if I ever explained why Relia got the condition and Ashur Moonfire didn't. The characters in this planet haven't studied Aeons as much, so it's a bit of an unknown variable for them. But I did cover it in Aeonica Book 3: (Cladius Raider): "Half-bloods can only become Ethermancers if their mothers were Aeons. Did you know that?” Ciena blinked. “Seriously?” She hadn’t heard that before, but it made sense. Nahlia and Ilsa were both half-bloods with Aeon mothers, and they’d become Ethermancers. Cladius’s own mother was a human, and he couldn’t even enter the Ethereal. He nodded. “It’s not a popular topic. Aeons and humans liked to believe we were two distinct species. It was the only way to justify how we treated each other.” She frowned. “But how come it only works for mothers?” “Aeons have Etherite in their bodies,” he said. “This Etherite doesn’t pass from the father to a mother. It does, however, pass from mother to child.” So the TL;DR there is that Lyraina passed Etherite to her son (Ashur Moonfire) and he was born as a full Aeon/mana artist hybrid, with a working crystal soul from the start. Ashur didn't pass any Etherite to Relia, so she had to fix her condition by building an Aeon soul. But because Relia had the right bloodline, she didn't risk permanent damage in the same way as Lena and Kalden's brother. Hope that helps!

David

Okay a question. I was under the impression that converting to Aeon blocks your progress to higher levels. I mean Aeon conversion enhances your current level, so an artisan can go toe to toe with the master level. But they are stuck there? Now they can go to the mystic level? And moonfire is Aeon mystic. Then why is Kalden's brother stuck in Artisan? It is confusing. Am I understanding the explanations wrong?

Mohammed Mahedi Hasan


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