Chapter 8, Pages 2 & 3
Added 2023-10-18 19:40:38 +0000 UTCThe next 11 pages are gonna be a lot of fun, as we get a short tour around Val's mind. Her story will be told in first person through her journal entries (Val would never have a diary). ;)
You've seen page 3 before. I did a few touch ups here, but I am planning to redo it at a later date because it doesn't play the way I'd hoped it would. In the meantime, I'm gonna be working on pages 4 & 5 at the same time to see if that helps my workflow.
Alright! I'm gonna go and finish packing up mail club. Should be ready to go out tomorrow! Have a great evening, everyone!
Comments
And teams up with her kinky-brain.
Talasha
2023-11-07 23:27:17 +0000 UTCAwesome! Thanks so much for helping me get the book printed! :D
Stereoscope Comics
2023-10-20 19:42:01 +0000 UTCAh yes! And the places her brain shall go!
Stereoscope Comics
2023-10-20 19:41:13 +0000 UTCAwesome! Thanks so much for helping the campaign! Enjoy!
Stereoscope Comics
2023-10-20 19:40:52 +0000 UTCGot my book today! Flipped through it and landed in the bonus comics in the back and got a good laugh out of the sub seniority joke!
AThrowawayJoke
2023-10-20 08:10:26 +0000 UTChehehe, glad to see Val is having fun Her DM brain is taking over XD
kou32
2023-10-19 22:25:53 +0000 UTCMy book arrived today! Looks awesome! And the stickers are cute... thank you!
Dan
2023-10-19 18:00:17 +0000 UTCExcellent! Thanks for the correction! Excited to share the next few pages!
Stereoscope Comics
2023-10-19 14:14:49 +0000 UTCEven if I knew how to do that, I wouldn’t admit it, lol. I do some writing too, so I like to read between the lines
Canti
2023-10-19 14:14:18 +0000 UTCMy army of editors strike again! Thanks for spotting that! 👍
Stereoscope Comics
2023-10-19 14:13:22 +0000 UTCDude, did you hack my computer and read my notes?!🤣 Will be interested to hear your thoughts on upcoming pages. Gonna be fun!
Stereoscope Comics
2023-10-19 14:10:05 +0000 UTCBut I can't wait I want it now lmao. Seriously though great job
Michael Kehoe
2023-10-19 14:07:33 +0000 UTCThanks! So happy to be working on the book again! More pages on the way!🎉
Stereoscope Comics
2023-10-19 14:05:56 +0000 UTCThanks! 😜
Stereoscope Comics
2023-10-19 14:05:18 +0000 UTCGreat idea! Yeah, I think she deserves a proper print. Thanks!
Stereoscope Comics
2023-10-19 14:04:03 +0000 UTCAwesome! I hope you enjoy all the goodies (and the book, too)!
Stereoscope Comics
2023-10-19 14:03:11 +0000 UTCI believe you are correct. Thanks!
Stereoscope Comics
2023-10-19 14:01:58 +0000 UTCThanks for the save!👍
Stereoscope Comics
2023-10-19 14:01:29 +0000 UTCThanks! That I can fix!🎸🎶
Stereoscope Comics
2023-10-19 14:01:08 +0000 UTCOh, just wait! We’ve got some fun ones coming! 🥳
Stereoscope Comics
2023-10-19 14:00:02 +0000 UTCThis rope is a handy holding aid. ;)
the_iceman
2023-10-19 07:30:05 +0000 UTCThey're not HARD to find. ;)
char-dawg
2023-10-19 02:24:16 +0000 UTCI want to see Val with the purple rope and black leather now. I also want some purple rope.
DoItYourself251
2023-10-18 21:54:12 +0000 UTCVery nice work
Notebook
2023-10-18 21:49:05 +0000 UTCLove the changes, nice and subtle
Nchalada
2023-10-18 21:30:55 +0000 UTCI like that “the new her is good at lying” when her mental image is of Ellie and the girl in question is in fact a terrible liar and nowhere near that composed. The contrast makes it funny
Canti
2023-10-18 20:29:35 +0000 UTCWow! Great story line direction. Look forward to what comes next.
Villager
2023-10-18 20:02:24 +0000 UTCOK those are almost my favorite pages so far
Michael Kehoe
2023-10-18 19:56:37 +0000 UTCMy Black Box arrived yesterday! It's beautiful!!
Kalia Grey
2023-10-18 19:54:35 +0000 UTCI see that DM kind of brain.
Mei Mei
2023-10-18 19:52:14 +0000 UTCVal's got quite the imagination on her, and it's so cute and dorky! I'm glad we've finally reached her POV!
Death of Ink
2023-10-18 19:51:46 +0000 UTCMy Black Box arrived woooo!! No 166 :D
Ozz
2023-10-18 19:48:44 +0000 UTCYou are missing a word in the dialogue box, bottom left corner. "They are not X to find. The city breeds them."
Ajax
2023-10-18 19:47:39 +0000 UTCThink you missed a word on the second page "They're not (hard) to find, the city breeds them." Other than that, looks exciting.
Brad Kitts
2023-10-18 19:47:15 +0000 UTC"not hard to find", I believe.
Fritz Sands
2023-10-18 19:46:29 +0000 UTCYou left out a word on page 3 bottom text bubble.
smack54
2023-10-18 19:45:49 +0000 UTCLooking great, always happy to see Val content. However, minor mistake on pg 3 - 'they are not to find'
SwanSong1620
2023-10-18 19:45:29 +0000 UTC
