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Chapter 2 looks like this (๐Ÿคก):

Because I won't be able to finish the full chapter for a couple weeks, Chapter 2, Part 2, Page 12 is a good scene change to share! I'm redoing the thumbs for the rest of the book (Chapters 4-6) while I have a (sort of) lull in work and have the brain energy to spare. ๐Ÿ˜…

Next stop: Achilles' room!!!! ๐Ÿš‚

I'll update this post with the full PDF once the remaining half is done!! Public release TBD, maybe end of April?


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Thank you, Iโ€™m glad!! ๐Ÿ˜ญ I imagine itโ€™s hard being best friends and also being in love / being inexorably drawn ๐Ÿ˜” theyโ€™ll resolve it sometimeโ€ฆ but not this chapter ๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜…

That was so fun to read! They were awkward but then they seemed to relax and then suddenly the whole conversation slipped back into a mess. Than has the perfect advantage for leaving a conversation unfinished D: Nice little emotional rollercoaster that leaves me with anticipation.

Thank you!! Iโ€™m glad to hear that ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ’œ I trying to avoid a pitfall where theyโ€™re exaggeratedly & repeatedly awkward or upset without taking their entire history into consideration ๐Ÿฅบ

You capture the dynamic of Than and Zag being so awkward at one another so well without making either of them seem bumbling.

Alu ๐Ÿ˜ญ Your comments are always so attentive. I'm so glad you noticed that panel, since that was one I added last minute and waffled about keeping before deciding to keep it ๐Ÿ’œ They're all just talking so hopefully it can be interesting visually too

I love them all so much. Seeing Than and Zag playing around like this, only to have that misunderstanding destroying the mood, AAAAAH ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ Also i love the tension on Achilles at the simple mention of Patroclus; or just the panel focus on the codex Zagreus is holding: it's "just a panel" but to me this means a lot, if we consider this focus is from Achilles's eyes!


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