Ch5Pg1: Step 3.5
Added 2016-04-08 00:53:05 +0000 UTC"Further Adventures in Graphic Design: Agonizing Over Tiny Details" was too long of a title.
Messed with this guy a teensy bit more since this morning since I thought it didn't look "flame-y" enough. What do you guys think?
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seems like every one likes B and i agree defenetly make it pop a bit more
James M Heinonen
2016-04-09 02:21:14 +0000 UTCI think B is more fitting for the overall look.
Nathan Weber
2016-04-08 22:41:53 +0000 UTCI don't want to break up the silhouette TOO much, otherwise it'll get a little muddy, but I want to see what I can do to preserve the silhouette of the first while adding more "flames" similar to the second. AUGH THIS IS HARD
Meg Syv
2016-04-08 17:59:57 +0000 UTCOo! I do like B more. Nice small tweak that makes quite a difference!
Marie-Claire Saindon
2016-04-08 14:34:39 +0000 UTCB has a more dramatic appeal. A doesn't even work with the whole "circle" mentality, because, look, the tail extends out of that "circle". Stick with B.
Jon Krupp
2016-04-08 05:22:23 +0000 UTCB with more feathers curling out of the circle.
2016-04-08 04:15:20 +0000 UTCB!
2016-04-08 03:58:33 +0000 UTCBoth. Because there will be instances when you need something to fit into a perfect circle (such as A) but the rest of the time extra curves of B make a more interesting and fun design. "A" works well for coins. :D
Mary Williams
2016-04-08 02:27:44 +0000 UTCB. Like other's have said, A looks like something that would be carved/stamped into metal by some dwarf smith. And if I didn't have prior knowledge of "it's a phoenix," A has the potential to be a crest of a more common bird of prey. Meanwhile, B is better, but now there's the dilemma of having the other feathers bend to match. I can see the challenge of adding curves while keeping minimalism. Among other things, I can't wait to see the end result! :D ( Both would look awesome stamped/gilded into a red leather bound journal and the like. ) EDIT: Would cutting flame shapes inside the bird silhouette get too weird?
2016-04-08 02:21:19 +0000 UTCB. Because it looks more alive, and less geometric.
Hariman
2016-04-08 01:28:37 +0000 UTCB definitely better. Has more of an organic feel reminiscent of chaotic fire. A looks more blade-like with its sharp edges and hooks, which engenders the cold feeling of metal. At least for me, anyway. ;P
Jessica K
2016-04-08 01:08:23 +0000 UTCoh dear
Meg Syv
2016-04-08 01:06:54 +0000 UTCB π
Matthew Thull
2016-04-08 00:54:08 +0000 UTC
