How to Write a Concise Script
Added 2016-04-18 19:44:01 +0000 UTC1. Have a thousand different versions of a script where Thistle sees/hears the explosion and runs towards it.
2. Ask yourself if it can be summed up in one panel/4 words.
3. Draw that panel.
4. Hope it won't disappoint readers.
5. Suffer mild panic attacks until reader response.
Comments
she's just so tired all the time poor bb
Meg Syv
2016-04-19 17:53:29 +0000 UTCOH THANK GOODNESS
Meg Syv
2016-04-19 17:53:14 +0000 UTC6. watch as that becomes the best scene of the that days update. (That is an awesome scene. I love it.)
Becca
2016-04-19 04:03:34 +0000 UTCAwwww, poor girl got herself so flustered with over exerting her abilities that she can't English anymore. *hugs poor baby*
Naziha Zahed
2016-04-18 22:47:52 +0000 UTCDont worry meg, I'd be more concerned if thistle jumped into a long flowing speech when she's obviously exhausted.
peter allen
2016-04-18 22:31:00 +0000 UTCoh dear
Meg Syv
2016-04-18 21:24:53 +0000 UTC<a href="http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-HOzERZKL_Y4/UvQOn9kiakI/AAAAAAAAASg/SlBZ4G217Z8/s1600/kevin+funny.gif" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-HOzERZKL_Y4/UvQOn9kiakI/AAAAAAAAASg/SlBZ4G217Z8/s1600/kevin+funny.gif</a>
Meg Syv
2016-04-18 21:24:36 +0000 UTCExcellent: all the information without unnecessary pronouns or prepositions. Everyone should speak more like Orrig (or Thistle with a possible concussion).
2016-04-18 19:57:19 +0000 UTCBig bada BOOOM! New Thistle Theory involves thermal tape lingerie. :P But will they make her present a Multi-Pass?
2016-04-18 19:57:09 +0000 UTCProof that Thistle is a hero: she runs towards the danger instead of running away from it. Precious cinnamonroll.
Raye.Guns
2016-04-18 19:45:46 +0000 UTC
