Ch10 Pg02 HIRES
Added 2021-02-23 19:02:00 +0000 UTCDownload this image via the attachment at the bottom of this post.
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I was a little late uploading today's page because I got hung up on that Sound Effect in the first panel. There was just a lot of space there that I felt I could have done something with, so I made the most of it.
(EDIT: I ended up tweaking that sound effect a little more, but I'll leave this original take up here for you guys. Consider it an exclusive little treat!)
I've added a second image to this post that's just Yoko's colors as they were when she sent me the page - I always feel very conflicted whenever I go through and tweak a bunch of things in Yoko's renderings, so I'll look for opportunities to show and preserve the work she's done that doesn't have my fingerprints all over it. Plus, there's hopefully the added fun you'll have flipping back and forth between the two, spotting what changes I've made. Anyway, enjoy!
Comments
Honestly, I think I like your tweaks better - the original is gorgeous, but the tweaks make the page more dynamic and it feels more... like a disaster is looming.
Wolfdancer9
2021-02-25 05:44:53 +0000 UTCSame
Data Wall
2021-02-24 10:20:24 +0000 UTCokay so I know everyone's in danger and stuff but I keep thinking "wow Thistle looks so pretty"
BabyCharmander
2021-02-23 21:05:26 +0000 UTCI think you two work really well as a team. I looked at the original, and it was beautiful. What could anyone do to make it better I thought. Nothing. And then I looked back at the page and noticed your softened shadows and it was even more beautiful. And the sound effect makes awesome use of the blue sky space. You two are incredible together.
AlpineBob
2021-02-23 20:26:08 +0000 UTCSo, so, cool! It makes me want to run, flailing my arms wildly, screaming AAAHHHHHHH! - Quick thought: are we going to see the flowers thistle "leaked" or "grew" from way back whenever (but in story was only a few hours ago?). I've been keeping an eye out for them, though I think we're still too far away to see them. I thought they might be a landmark to say "this is the right way", or just small easter egg of continuity (though the party might bypass them entirely, since it looks like they are taking a "short cut" out of fear and necessity)
2021-02-23 20:20:44 +0000 UTCOh, for heaven's sake! I'll fix that - thanks for letting me know.
Meg Syv
2021-02-23 19:51:44 +0000 UTCNot a biggie, just pointing the current hires link leads to 10-1 and not 10-2. Clicking the top image works of course. (Fixed now π) Use the scroll wheel to inspect the party's dental hygiene π (not Orrig, he's shy).
2021-02-23 19:43:58 +0000 UTCAt some point I'm going to have a comment that isn't just screaming about the colors, but it is not this day
Julia
2021-02-23 19:42:57 +0000 UTCBookmarking this comment for no reason in particular.
Meg Syv
2021-02-23 19:12:19 +0000 UTCYou know what would be funny in a terrifying way? if they're all seeing the shelter in the wrong spot and the horse is trying to go to the real shelter!
peter allen
2021-02-23 19:07:25 +0000 UTCHoly cow you guys are just knocking them out of the park one after another
Ellie
2021-02-23 19:04:35 +0000 UTC
