Erzya and Aby commission Extended Angle 2
Added 2017-09-21 02:04:04 +0000 UTCAngle 2 of the current project, with the wrong preview GIF above :P. More are in the oven!
Angle 1: https://uploadir.com/u/ued93u10
Angle 2: https://uploadir.com/u/2b7q2j2k
Comments
Sorry if I came across as aggressive, I love your advice Nej. It really fuels me. I do feel I slightly failed at this as a pure porn piece and tried to subconsciously make it into a game cutscene/cinematic(where can I get this game?? :P ). I came to this conclusion earlier before you even said it. It's been both bothering me and making me silently happy because there might be more future in this for me than I anticipated. That thought alone is making me tingly. Perhaps I should do a few SFW pieces too.
Ayasz
2017-09-21 03:35:13 +0000 UTCThats perfectly fine my dear and it looks great right now. You didn't fail at all. Not one bit. I'm just offering a little constructive criticism because you're improving with every work and I love to see you pouring your depravity into such scenes. Its delicious.
Nejura
2017-09-21 03:28:48 +0000 UTCMnn, also each camera angle should be positioned to really show off your work. Gotta get that goodness in properly framed with enough meaty context to sell it all.
Nejura
2017-09-21 02:31:40 +0000 UTCMnn, I haven't commented to much on these lately trying to be patient, but yesss. Also I know you mentioned about how much effort and time it takes to make each motion unique and different. Thats true but it really pays off when you have everything else setup to really focus in on that and everyone can oooh and aww at your skills and how organic everything looks. That of course takes time to get worked into your workflow and have the artist's eye for how the scene playing out is going to draw the eye.
Nejura
2017-09-21 02:16:06 +0000 UTC
