A new song! (voice memo)
Added 2021-02-28 16:47:20 +0000 UTCHello my amazing patrons :)
I wrote this last night and thus far my producer's reaction was "oof" and my mom's reaction was "JEEZ" so I think it hits home xD. We still need to refine it a bit, especially the verses and bridge, but I'm very excited by this song.
Enjoy!
xxMKR
Lyrics:
VERSE 1
You’d watch her sing at the bar next door
You couldn’t keep it hidden anymore
You’d light up every time her eyes met yours
So you tell her how you feel
She admires your honesty
You knew your heart, and she could clearly see
I know you’re nervous but hey at least
you told her how you feel
CHORUS
As long as you showed her
all that I know you to be
If she’s anything like me
she’ll fall in love
If she’s anything like me
she’ll fall in love
VERSE 2
I watch you slip into a plot line
From a tale as old as time
The familiar bells ringing loud in my mind
But I can’t tell you how I feel
I guess my healing is a little slow
But your newfound fire is free to grow
Besides it’s her turn to bask in it’s glow
So I’ll never tell you how I feel
CHORUS
As long as you showed her
all that I know you to be
If she’s anything like me
she’ll fall in love
If she’s anything like me
she’ll fall in love
BRIDGE
It’s like I’m looking in my rear view mirror
At memories that time is making clearer and clear
I only hope she holds everyone of them dear
Cause I’m pretty sure I know how she feels
CHORUS
As long as you showed her
all that I know you to be
If she’s anything like me
she’ll fall in love
If she’s anything like me
she’ll fall in love
Comments
I have no words except, wow.
QueenT
2021-03-03 01:00:17 +0000 UTCI like this one but I'm mostly posting a message because my last message took me to 13 and I'm vaguely superstitious about 13s.
Bree Campbell
2021-03-02 16:11:21 +0000 UTCI absolutely love this song
Jettred2001
2021-03-02 08:39:43 +0000 UTCThat song was great and I love it. You have a great talent.
Christer Lind
2021-03-01 12:29:27 +0000 UTCYour voice, the lyrics, the overall tune, narrates this song beautifully.
2021-03-01 08:19:51 +0000 UTCTears
Joel Keene
2021-03-01 05:53:18 +0000 UTCOuch. A bit too close to home there.
Caith Donovan
2021-03-01 04:59:07 +0000 UTCSimply beautiful.
Craig T. White
2021-03-01 02:07:56 +0000 UTCDamn that really does hit. Dunno if it even needs more than maybe a second take before it'd be good to go, but still interested in where you take it.
Official PSI
2021-02-28 17:58:33 +0000 UTCWow .... I really like this. I'm sure you will tweak it, but what you have now is excellent.
Hank van Deventer
2021-02-28 17:47:04 +0000 UTCDamn this one hits home, I've been there with my last girlfriend... The sad melody conveys the melancholy I sometimes feel but I'm also honestly happy for her because she found someone who makes her smile so much. Great song, thank you for sharing it. :)
Ines
2021-02-28 17:08:26 +0000 UTCI mean, I read the lyrics first...
Lisa Prolman
2021-02-28 17:06:56 +0000 UTCLove it. I can't wait to hear it with music!
Lisa Prolman
2021-02-28 17:06:15 +0000 UTCThe song is amazing she doesn't need to change it at all I love all her stuff
Stephanie
2021-02-28 16:57:51 +0000 UTCOof/jeez! Can't say I've ever been in that sort of position and I hope you aren't, but I love the song. As far as relationship-is-over songs go, it's quite the contrast with the one you played the wrong version of for us yesterday!
Cinnder
2021-02-28 16:57:20 +0000 UTCGood stuff! Took me a second to catch onto the rhyming scheme for the verses (aaab/cccb), but it's really nice and relaxing, especially the end part.
Brent Dreher
2021-02-28 16:51:37 +0000 UTCOh my. That moment when the chorus rolls in and the meaning hits you. Oof indeed
Jonathan Isip
2021-02-28 16:51:26 +0000 UTC
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