Ice Pie 12
Added 2022-05-21 03:53:09 +0000 UTCNot sure if I should stop the chapter here, or finish out the interview before starting chapter 13. Let me know what you think.
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Pretty sure you have to be wealthy to have class. Elegance is just money in a fancy hat.
2022-06-01 04:30:35 +0000 UTCThe whole eat the rich thing felt really, really out of place. Eden is about class, not wealth.
Len White
2022-05-29 21:25:15 +0000 UTCEither way, whether it's skipped or if you expand on it, I think it should still be a part of this chapter. Even if it's a double length chapter because that's how long you plan on it being. Cutting here is too rough. But i really want to see Anya demonstrate how she's actually really smart.
Green0Photon
2022-05-21 13:57:52 +0000 UTC
