Ice Pie Chapter 17
Added 2023-09-17 19:11:00 +0000 UTCNotes at the end of the document. There may end up being significant additions to this. ...Or the next chapter will be out shortly. Don't know yet.
But, as mentioned, I will be releasing another Ice Pie chapter before I go back to Then Be Batman.
Comments
You gotta love an update
Green0Photon
2023-09-18 04:42:45 +0000 UTCI don't see any problems with the chapter, it's got some hooks for later via the music and addresses how they're bringing Yor on side with their deception. I do think it feels unfinished but all I'd suggest is the opening of the interrogation and showing of genius and it'd be solid.
Luker number 5
2023-09-17 19:42:28 +0000 UTC
