Ice Pie: Chapter 18
Added 2023-09-19 06:54:00 +0000 UTCWell, I didn't end up cutting this down the way I thought it was going to go. In fact, it ended up long. As in, more that twice as long as chapter 17. And here it is, basically a day and a half later.
I'll post the last chapter on the forums tomorrow or something. Still want to do some editing. Comments appreciated!
Comments
Lots of good "bon mots" this chapter, as that teacher would say. I enjoyed the round peg in the round hole... that stabs you! "But the beauty is in the making.” hits pretty strongly too. Thanks for writing!
Benjamin Hower
2023-09-19 17:42:55 +0000 UTCWoo, an update! Didn't expect it so quickly
Green0Photon
2023-09-19 07:09:02 +0000 UTC
