New Stories: FIX IT OR RUIN IT
Added 2022-09-22 10:24:30 +0000 UTCMy first try on story with a gameshow trope. The idea is rather than one party fighting for cash, it's two parties competing to change each other.
The first chapter is around 4100 words. The main themes of the story are
corruption, and transformation.
Enjoy reading, if you have any feedback, I'm all ear
Comments
This is a fun one so far. How come I have the feeling that the more the mother of the bullied girl plays she's going to eventually fall in love with the bully or at least admire her. It feels like it's being hinted at after every transformation. Or even worse become the bully herself
red
2022-09-28 18:13:59 +0000 UTCwell, it seems I get too much carried with one shot, all the blame is on me because I'm easy to get distracted by sudden ideas, but worry not, the older series is still in my WIP, it just sometimes I'm writing myself into corner and hit a writer block for them but I'm still working on them whenever I'm get free from the writer block
deepediamcs
2022-09-24 23:38:52 +0000 UTCCool one! I like the idea and the rules you've came up with, but I hope you get to finish some of the stories you've started before.
Steven Barry
2022-09-24 20:24:25 +0000 UTC
