Beatrix and the Book of Wickedness
Added 2023-03-06 07:17:13 +0000 UTCSorry for the lateness.
Beatrix and the Book of Wickedness is my second try at the magical book that can transform people genre. Previously, I have a story with a similar title: The book of Wickedness. Despite the similar title, this one offers a much different story than the previous one but still retains the element of transforming someone to be their wicked version.
This story was 5100 words long. Enjoy reading, and as always, all feedback is appreciated.
Comments
The Foster family part of the story was creative. I like that it was less about making them Beatrix's minions and more about them becoming The worse versions of themselves. I like that it wasn't instantaneous. I like those kind of transformations when they're kind of aware and you got a good idea of who they were before they fully transform.
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2023-03-06 11:01:14 +0000 UTC
