The New Coach Chapter 3 + Chapter 2 rewrite
Added 2023-09-01 17:40:09 +0000 UTCFinished the newest chapter of The New Coach. Sorry for the wait. This chapter tells the beginning of subtle dynamic change between Scott and his mother after being hit by Darel's subliminal.
This chapter is around 3900 words long. Enjoy!
Additionally, I have fixed several grammatical mistakes sin chapter 2 so it will be easier to read.