The New Coach Chapter 33
Added 2025-12-12 05:59:37 +0000 UTCThank you for your patience, I'm sorry that this takes a while. I'm overwhelmed by the financial emergency. Thank you for those who help me and commission me. I could take a little breather to write some story.
Chapter 33 to nobody surprise, is about the last Mohen's family daughter, Astrid Mohen, the private investigator who want to help Scott. She will be the bridge to unholy alliance between the former oppresor (Darel) and his victims (Scott) or will it be called an alliance at all?
Dropbox link: https://www.dropbox.com/scl/fi/9w4x91aw5889nf5o1g7yb/The-New-Coach-Chapter-33.pdf?rlkey=5c4yg16gcsi1ubuwnq2g0s3i1&st=x7bdtd8l&dl=0
Anyway: I'm still opening 2 commission slots left, you can commission any amounts of words (With minimum of 1000) from me. Please consider commissioning me, thank you.
Comments
Considering to write both. When I started this, I had planned for bad ending, so I will write bad ending first, but I'm open for writing a good ending for alternate/branched ending after I done with the bad ending
deepediamcs
2025-12-13 21:30:44 +0000 UTCWill the story have a good or bad ending ?
Mr-zhan
2025-12-13 21:17:54 +0000 UTC
