Revised Old Content: Kimono Convert, The Retreat at BLKS Resort
Added 2025-12-20 00:51:53 +0000 UTCAs I said before, I will update the old stories as I submit them to McStories. Most of the time, it might be just a grammar fix without the story being changed, but sometimes I will do a bigger revision to play with new ideas.
This time, the revised content is:
Kimono Convert: https://www.dropbox.com/scl/fi/tj42c6c1522ji1rxon6eq/Kimono-Convert-Updated.pdf?rlkey=xx5alizob5wk4ilhuq28qysgk&st=szy4p9uy&dl=0
The Retreat at BLKS Resort Day 1 and Day 2:
Day 1: https://www.dropbox.com/scl/fi/6ygzhnncltzzddf25jrbi/The-Retreat-at-BLKS-Resort-Chapter-1-Day-1-Updated.pdf?rlkey=mvog48ke8n75d1x8t7dt4yhhb&st=8icq7d1n&dl=0
Day 2: https://www.dropbox.com/scl/fi/mgdcd1zt3tw7okl1kn48s/The-Retreat-at-BLKS-Resort-Chapter-2-Day-2-Updated.pdf?rlkey=r4aaq8r4k2m02qa06u0x4tkbv&st=daqb0y6k&dl=0
The above story gets some plot or detail additions and fixes that might change how the story flows. I will revise the rest of the retreat at BLKS resort and add a new chapter on top of all the revisions later.
