The Deal, Part 1
Added 2015-04-01 03:54:16 +0000 UTCHere are the first five chapters of The Deal. Please let me know what you think!
Comments
I really enjoyed it, I didn't really have a problem with Rhiyen's personality, although it would get irritating if he's like that the entire book. My only issue was the scene with Tony from the previous year, I think it could use a better introduction because I had to read it a couple times before I realized it was in the past.
Grant Smittle
2015-04-24 18:06:10 +0000 UTCYeah, he's not too likeable at the moment. There are reasons, but still...
Matthew Schocke
2015-04-07 20:45:52 +0000 UTCWriting style is excellent, the snark is fun, but god I hate Rhiyen as a character. I continue reading this because my hope is that he gets his smug self-satisfied world turned entirely on it's head and he has to learn that you can't get through life being a surly dick to everyone.
Brian Scott
2015-04-07 20:37:20 +0000 UTC
