Rhiyen's Deal - Part XI
Added 2016-01-30 02:53:54 +0000 UTCI hope you all are enjoying 2016! My month could be better, but dealing with bureaucracies is better than being dead (I think), so that's something. The plot thickens in Glenridge, and someone is raising the stakes...
Let me know how you enjoy the story so far - remember I'm writing this for all of you!
Comments
Phew, just read the whole thing straight - pretty intense. The character interactions are great but it's also really nice to start having some of the mysteries explained, somewhat. Something about the whole story made me kinda anticipate the kind of thing Rhiyen's shadow might be, it was cool to find I read the atmosphere right. Man though, really building some tension, I keep getting worked up about what's going to happen to our heroes. If you don't mind me asking do you know how long this story is going to be? You're doing a good job at keeping me guessing as to where we are in the narrative arc. Looking forward to the next installment.
Julia Knowles
2016-02-06 14:40:48 +0000 UTCCertainly getting interesting! Obviously they have wasted their time on the entirely wrong sorts of nerddom, there is a distinct lack of genre savviness in their little group. Looking forward to what happens next and hope things improve!
Torbin
2016-01-30 03:45:44 +0000 UTC
