Rhiyen's Deal - Part 17 (finale!)
Added 2016-07-31 21:29:54 +0000 UTCA jumbo update with the climax and the epilogue to our tale. Some odd things you may have noted earlier in the story will suddenly make sense. I hope. If you have any questions now, please ask as there are no more spoilers left. (At least in this story.) I freely acknowledge that I may need to tweak my foreshadowing, so please do ask!
We've also set the stage for Book 2. *Grin*
Comments
Your writing is always so nice and detailed and adventurous. I like how you make your characters interesting even if they sometimes are social inepts like myself when I was in high school XD Rhiyen's live for his first true friends is beautiful. Karen's strength, Howard's quirks and Tia's awkward way to show her childish love are truly magnificent. I'm looking forward to reading now book 2. I think I'm totally in love with all your writing! Hope everything is better and better on the health front.
Paula GV aka Yukimi87
2019-03-27 12:36:10 +0000 UTCThank you! I wasn't ready either... as you can see.
Matthew Schocke
2017-02-25 01:01:06 +0000 UTCI just spent the last five hours or so reading this entire story. I enjoyed it immensely. The plot kept me guessing, and the characterisation was brilliant. The conclusion was almost too sudden, but the fact that there's a book 2 is reassuring. I'm not ready to let these characters go.
Verity Davey
2017-02-05 04:44:10 +0000 UTC
