Viridian Awakening - Part II
Added 2018-01-26 12:07:18 +0000 UTCWell, here's the next installment of William's odyssey. Response so far has been good, based on the likes.
Things take a strange turn as the phrase "no good deed goes unpunished" seems to take on a life of it's own!
Comments
I hope you'll like the more introspective stuff coming up... once things calm down a bit.
Matthew Schocke
2018-02-17 08:50:35 +0000 UTCIt's definitely off to an interesting start. I kind of like how chill the guy is about everything. Not in the traditional "I don't care what's happening" sense, but more in the "I need to respond to what's happening, but not freak out about it" sense. It's a different twist on the main character that I don't usually see in these kinds of stories. On the other hand, it does dehumanize him a bit. So far he's had no choice, he's just kinda getting swept up in events. Once things slow down, it'd be nice to see a bit more from his perspective what he was like before, and what he thinks about all this.
Cam
2018-01-31 03:13:30 +0000 UTC
