Okay, I'll admit the sketch in panel 1 (pg. 3) I didn't feel like redrawing so I just scooted my panel lines over and redrew the lettering. Before I did, the lettering was on Yakone's backside instead of behind, it this was a better choice.
Forest backgrounds, turns out, are easy- to draw. >_> Hopefully it's consistent though. Ended up having a range of expressions on these pages, eh? Gosh, I love drawing. Even just having a few good moments for characters to bounce off each other and talk are good.
PLEASE PREPARE YOURSELF FOR IN STUDIO REFERENCE PICTURES.

Pointy point for pg. 3 panel 1. Really helpful when image searching didn't get me close to what I needed.
Also, pg. 3 panel 5, which turned out quite good, if I may say so myself.

Pg. 4, panel 2, which I kind of deliberated as too whether or not to change the pose before taking the picture. I inevitability went back to the pointing pose, but HEY it did help.
Hope y'all enjoy these pencilly comic pages. MAKING THEM INKS MEOW.
Zack Richardson
2020-02-13 00:02:59 +0000 UTC