Early Access - The Dead Deception Page 80
Added 2020-09-30 18:59:59 +0000 UTC
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❤️ catching up on patreon now. I like this. ❤️ This comic is about to end... i spammed at the beginning what was wrong. But i guess i never said why i liked this comic so much. And the fact is... i like it because it bears your stamp. • well rounded characters with good and bad parts to each. • aside from the deliberate obscuring of this specific detailed revealed here and on the following page, which... i guess everybody has to learn from somewhere, the interactions between characters were very much believable and on point. • The worldbuilding... i know you have been trying variations on this theme for ages, but it clicks together neatly. Again. Aside from the one detail here. ... so i guess the reasons why i liked this comic is exactly the reason why it was so jarring for that detail to be missing. Because everything fits together and feels believable. And (i must be honest) the vast majority of comic book writers... have no clue how to achieve that. So it was like seeing one perfectly satisfying puzzle coming together and then the very last piece of the puzzle is mis-shapen or misprinted. It's basically like the "uncanny valley" for story writing. All in all 7/10 will keep buying your kickstarters when you make more. And sometimes, feel free to plug your shop. https://kelmcdonald.com/product-category/comic-books/ This is some good stuff. 👍
Simone Spinozzi
2020-10-02 16:59:51 +0000 UTC
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