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The Road to Hell Chapter 20

Last Road to Hell chapter this month — you guys should get a PoP chapter on Wednesday unless something else decides to derail me.

Happy Father’s Day to any dads who might be reading this.


The Road to Hell Chapter 20

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Again, a good chapter. Good word choice, good length. However, I think I will wait until at least a few more chapters are out so that I can read them in one go. Otherwise its overall pacing is a little jarring for me for the reasons explained in the comment at the last chapter. It is a good fanfic with an interesting setting. Though the beginning was very promising it currently is still not on par with PoP, in my opinion, however, I am looking forwards to how it will progress.

Bovragor


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