The Road to Hell Chapter 20
Added 2023-06-18 18:35:37 +0000 UTCLast Road to Hell chapter this month — you guys should get a PoP chapter on Wednesday unless something else decides to derail me.
Happy Father’s Day to any dads who might be reading this.
Comments
Again, a good chapter. Good word choice, good length. However, I think I will wait until at least a few more chapters are out so that I can read them in one go. Otherwise its overall pacing is a little jarring for me for the reasons explained in the comment at the last chapter. It is a good fanfic with an interesting setting. Though the beginning was very promising it currently is still not on par with PoP, in my opinion, however, I am looking forwards to how it will progress.
Bovragor
2023-06-24 08:29:02 +0000 UTC
