Chapter 330: New Divinity
Added 2019-04-13 16:27:04 +0000 UTCApologies. It was pointed out that I did a goof, so I had to rewrite the second half of the chapter. Enjoy... again!
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Yup. More chapter's I release after that, the harder it would be to rewrite that part...
2019-04-14 17:48:37 +0000 UTCNobody's perfect, and better it comes up now, before you release the next book. :)
n00by_ME
2019-04-14 17:46:52 +0000 UTCWELP, looks like it's time to go back and rewrite the chapter xD
2019-04-14 17:04:12 +0000 UTCAhh no, I just reread it and they got properly introduced. “There is one more person that will be fighting alongside us, whose presence you should be made aware of.” As I said that, I lifted my hand, feeling the spiritual energy rolling through my body. Tsubaki’s eyes opened wide for a moment as the grey mist rushed out of my arm, forming into a silver-haired elf. Her body was covered with a dark blue dress, dotted with silver lights that shone like the stars. Grabbing the sides of her dress, she gave a polite curtsy. “Pleasure to finally meet you, Tsubaki. My name is Leowynn.” Miller, Justin. World Keeper: Advent . Kindle Edition. Chapter 84
n00by_ME
2019-04-14 14:45:19 +0000 UTCAt the time, Tsubaki and Dale were fighting on two entirely different areas of the battlefield, while Tsubaki was enclosed within Aurivy's dungeon. Not to mention... Leowynn's aura has changed significantly now. Remember, she is connect to Dale's soul on a fundamental level, and his soul was just changed to a Divine Soul. That's why Leowynn herself had a divine aura. So even if Tsubaki had sensed her before, the feeling would be entirely different now. And I don't recall them ever having a face to face meeting before.
2019-04-14 12:19:26 +0000 UTCDidn't Tsubaki and Leowynn meet back when they were invaded? I am pretty sure she should've atleast seen her, which means she should've felt her "Aura" before. Or do I remember it wrong?
n00by_ME
2019-04-14 04:42:45 +0000 UTCBottom of page two, "front" should probably be "frontal".
Aaron Canning
2019-04-14 02:45:22 +0000 UTC
