Chapter 345: Unluck of the Draw
Added 2019-05-06 05:56:41 +0000 UTC
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And done
2019-05-06 14:30:14 +0000 UTCPersonal gripe, you've used "That said" twice fairly close together. Maybe change one of them? Like I said, personal gripe. I just feel it doesn't reads very well.
Aaron Canning
2019-05-06 14:15:39 +0000 UTCWell now you're just making me change the title :P
2019-05-06 08:54:29 +0000 UTCYou used that very same title merely 6 chapters ago. ;)
n00by_ME
2019-05-06 07:52:30 +0000 UTC
