Conjoining of Paragons Chapter 34 (Year 2, Chapter 1)
Added 2022-05-13 00:02:38 +0000 UTCSorry for the long delay here. This went through over a dozen drafts in the past few days and, honestly, I’m still not thrilled with it. I figured at this point, I’m better off posting it and seeing what you all think. Once a certain number of drafts are exhausted, I’ll never like it, no matter what I write.
You guys can expect chapter 35 by Sunday night.
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Comments
I appreciate the kind words. This one was rough to write, but I’m happy it’s done and seems to be well-received despite my concerns.
ACI100
2022-05-13 03:05:10 +0000 UTCLoved it honestly I have legitimately fallen so head over heels in love with your stories that I cancelled all my other author subs on here! I know self doubt creeps on but I’m here to tell you personally follow your gut even when you doubt yourself your doing an amazing job!
2022-05-13 02:49:21 +0000 UTC"Tom Riddle was a female whom he doubted would take up the moniker of Voldemort. That was a seismic shift for the better, but it had deeper implications that troubled him." I think thats supposed to start with Emily Riddle not Tom Riddle
Harkin
2022-05-13 01:27:23 +0000 UTCThe chapter was a nice opening, it shows how Harry is beginning to see the differences between Emily and Voldemort, through his fear hasn't gone away about it either. Emily's patience is not gonna last much longer in any case, through I don't think Harry will tell her everything just yet, but somethings will undoubtedly have to be told.
GyaNNN
2022-05-13 00:45:41 +0000 UTC
