Need to change ‘of the centuries’ to ‘over the centuries’, if we are giving free proof reading
Kef
2020-09-02 09:43:45 +0000 UTC
Shh, you imagined it.
2020-09-01 23:50:09 +0000 UTC
Is that third section about the pilot supposed to be waist or wrist? Cause people don't wear things around their wastes and the last chapter told us it was worn on the arm so even waist seems wrong.