Monthly update #21
Added 2022-10-24 15:57:36 +0000 UTC
- At least I finished a background for this month (Aiden's bedroom).
Not much to note here as I was struggling this month!
Gray's route is finished so I am having his route edited to address some criticism. I've also found a new VA for him so he can finally voice all of your names.
I've been writing Aiden's chapter 23 and it was tough. There's a part in it that I've had planned since the beginning, but nothing I wrote felt good enough. I've rewritten the scene several times.
So the whole month I've struggled with just a single chapter. I think I got a version down that I like, but it's taken up so much time that I didn't get to write the next chapter either.
So next month, you'll get one Aiden chapter. Starting in December, you should be getting two chapters a month again (though it might not be two chapters for Aiden, it might be James' side story).
Comments
You can find a list of spoken names by Gray and Aiden here: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1EUZw6jENbS9YhpcbK4sajgLdj6fIcHoTUR_ZYHR4-uc/edit?usp=sharing
Celianna
2022-10-28 19:28:43 +0000 UTCWait, Gray can voice more names?? Where can I find those names? I love Aiden's route by far! It's the funniest yet and your MC is so fierce and active in his route. It's because of you I'm trying to improve on how to write lead female characters and take inspiration from how to live like an active female as well! You're really great for going over Aiden's chapter over and over. I appreciate you putting time and effort into it!
2022-10-27 05:37:12 +0000 UTCThat sounds great! Any side stories about him, Caine, Gray, or Neil, and I get excited! It totally makes sense for James to have kids. I would love to see how he is as a dad!
EvilChani
2022-10-24 21:06:08 +0000 UTCI do have a couple in mind! His first side story is about his first Christmas on earth. Then another side story should focus on MC and James' kids. I usually errr on the side of having kids and whatnot (childfree myself), but for his story it makes a lot of sense. I feel like I'd be giving him too much of a preference over the others if I write two side stories though.
Celianna
2022-10-24 20:46:02 +0000 UTCOoh, a James side story. I guess I'm sticking around longer, because I don't want to miss that one! XD
EvilChani
2022-10-24 17:48:42 +0000 UTC
