Bad Beat: Chapter 7 (Finale)
Added 2024-12-18 10:00:02 +0000 UTCThe time has come, my good friends and neighbors, to wrap up this story and the year 2024 along with it!
This story was a bit different for me. I really feel like I struggle to show actual scenes of torture and classic conditioning, and oftentimes I try to make myself write those scenes specifically so that I can improve. I hope I was able to do that with this story, and the various scenes involving Angela at the mercy (or lack thereof) of Maddock. I feel like I have gotten better at it as a result, and I hope to use what I learned again someday.
I had a blast writing about a younger Nurse Maddock, and I hope this look into her and Angela's history has been fun and exciting. I have more stories planned that involve them, albeit set in the present day, and those may come down the road. We may even see an older Monique at some point, though I won't spoil where or when~
In the immediate future, however, we have a special story for New Years, starring a certain Mallory Matthews! After that, thanks to the votes of $5 and $10 Patrons, a remake of A Runaway In Stepford which will get more into Molly Johnson's life in Stepford, and how she learned to stop worrying and love conformity.
Enjoy, and happy holidays.
Comments
Thank you so much! I really appreciate it
Smokey
2024-12-18 17:15:25 +0000 UTCYeah, cottoned or cottoning on to something; to begin to understand or catch on to something. Admittedly not a phrase I use very often haha.
Smokey
2024-12-18 17:15:09 +0000 UTCWhat a devilish ending, typo aside. I loved this series. I'm definitely partial to your lesbian stepford stories, and this one was genius
Jakitron
2024-12-18 16:15:30 +0000 UTCCongratulations! “he had, in fact, cottoned onto what she had done” “Cottoned”?
Net Neutrality
2024-12-18 11:48:51 +0000 UTC