Runaway In Stepford: Chapter 1
Added 2025-01-29 10:00:03 +0000 UTCThank you to my $5 and $10 Patrons for voting on this story! I gave them the option of voting for a few different older stories of mine, all of them one-shots, which I wanted to redo from the ground up as multi-part stories. The winner of the poll was, of course, A Runaway In Stepford, the story which introduced recurring character Molly Johnson.
For those who have read the original story, this isn't just going to be a beat for beat remake. I have a few specific changes in mind I've been wanting to make, ranging from giving a definitive description of Molly's appearance all the way to rearranging and altering moments from the original story. This is essentially a full reboot of Molly's story, and I want to take the opportunity to explore her as a character. Starting with the scrappy runaway, and going all the way to perky, if a bit troublesome, Stepford youth. The original story will still be available to read, but insofar as there is a canon to my work, it is being replaced by this newer, more fleshed out version.
Enjoy~
Comments
Thank you so much!
Smokey
2025-02-10 20:32:19 +0000 UTCGreat start. I can't wait to read the next chapter
Spleen
2025-02-10 19:53:31 +0000 UTCThank you! I definitely want it to be a bit more of a journey than the original story, so there's going to be a bit more drama than in the original story.
Smokey
2025-01-30 16:06:23 +0000 UTCThis is off to a really, really good start! I wasn’t sure what to expect bc the original story has been one of my favs of yours ever since I first started reading your stuff, but I love the way you’re expanding and deepening the characterization. Also dig how, after a whole chapter of Bev being a helpful motherly figure, we get the convo with her husband and her repeatedly calling him Sir (one of my fav Stepford wife things), emphasizing the darker part of Stepford too
vasily26
2025-01-30 13:48:19 +0000 UTC
