Passing Love 2 | Page 9 | Process
Added 2020-06-16 21:33:12 +0000 UTCThe most notable shift in this page is changing the angle of panel 2 to be looking down at Joe, and not up. I think both angles work, but for whatever reason I could not make the initial pose look correct to my eyes. Foreshortening can be very tricky like that, and it was psyching me out a bit. I probably could have gotten it working given an extra day or two, but for the sake of time I switched it out.
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I like the change of pose in panel 2. Sure, that POV shows a bit less, but it also gives the viewer the impression they're staring at the "problem" from Joe's point of view. A bit less sexy but more valuable narrative-wise, and being this Joe and being it your art, you can afford the trade. ;)
Dhalo the Spirit
2020-06-18 11:25:17 +0000 UTC
