Passing Love 2 | Page 13 | Process
Added 2020-08-22 20:32:18 +0000 UTCI re-wrote the dialogue on this page a few times. Initially Dennis jumped to conclusions about Travis spitting out his load, but then I realized that he may not exactly know that's what Travis is doing or where he's going. For all he knew, Travis was about to exit his dorm.
I sketched out the entire page more or less in a day, and the next day I had second thoughts about the angle of Travis's head in the first panel, and spent literally the entire day attempting to draw a replacement. And then around the evening, I decided that the first head I drew wasn't so bad...
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Am I the only one who's hoping Dennis will bottom soon?
MK2011
2020-08-28 04:26:20 +0000 UTCOhhhh gotcha, that makes much more sense now - just went over my head lol
High-bi password
2020-08-23 23:16:33 +0000 UTCThe original line had Dennis concluding that Travis was spitting. But in truth, he has no reason to think that, as for all he knew Travis had already swallowed and was exiting his room for an unexplained reason.
Meesh
2020-08-23 19:02:18 +0000 UTCMaybe Iβm the only one who needs it spelled out, but what conclusion would he have jumped to? π
High-bi password
2020-08-22 22:37:13 +0000 UTC
