Passing Love 2 | Page 24 | Process
Added 2021-02-16 22:46:39 +0000 UTCI've been dying to make Travis full-on cry for ages and I'm excited it's finally happening! Is that weird? I don't get to portray this emotion very often, if ever...
With dialogue-heavy pages like this, I get tempted to break it up into 2 pages so that it's not all so squeezed in there. I ran the risk of rushing the mood here, but I think it's reasonable to say that Travis has been holding in tears for a while now. And Joe's the perfect listening post for him to finally let it all out with someone!
Comments
I think it worked really well. The pacing feels spot on!
Tsarin
2021-02-17 00:59:20 +0000 UTCYeah, I feel like this really makes sense for the emotional height of the moment. He’s so stressed out and upset that he would be talking fast, and he’s also processing a lot of emotion since this is still VERY fresh for him and it’s really hurting him. So it actually makes more sense to see him cry after all of that emotion just collapsing out of him at once.
High-bi password
2021-02-17 00:09:06 +0000 UTCIts not weird. This page is paced really well. Travis has had all this building up for ages so of course he's just gonna blurt it out. I hate that he has to be crying, but this is done so well!
Josh Redcliffe
2021-02-16 23:00:00 +0000 UTCCrying is cathartic. Travis needs it. I'm glad Joe is there to help him.
Gnardeaux
2021-02-16 22:48:56 +0000 UTC
