MLV - Mini chapter? - Discussion
Added 2018-06-08 13:42:47 +0000 UTCThis mini chapter would be basically "My Little Ventrue Pt. 02 Ch 12.5" instead of moving onto Pt. 3.
This was a chapter I had started writing randomly between bits of the final few chapters of MLV Pt2. It's almost entirely a sex scene, and the POV is Natasha. I wanted a Natasha sex scene before Pt2 ended but I never found a spot to insert it.
Natasha is a tiny, skinny little introverted shy girl, and a bit of a pushover. Jessy is a tall, strong, extroverted dominant-type girl, who has four male ghouls. But Jessy is also Natasha's close friend. Sex ensues. Yes, that's 6 people. :3
Worth finishing? It's 100% masturbation material chapter, but I like writing those sometimes, and Natasha deserves a sex scene. BUT I could save it for a different time, maybe insert the scene into a different spot in the story, or not write it at all if you readers think it's wasted potential better used later.
The chapter would be free BTW, no charge, since it'd be half~ish the length of my usual.
Comments
Well Jessy gets laid nearly every night, I just never write about it. :3
Novus Animus
2018-06-10 01:55:57 +0000 UTCI think Natasha and Jessy both deserve to get laid.
Sildani
2018-06-09 13:10:37 +0000 UTCwould totally like to read it.... it seemed like you were leading up to it back at the start of part 2 chapter 6. Just would seem a bit out of place at the end of part 2. well.. maybe not out of place, just out of order lol. It would totally have worked as a continuation of the natasha epiloguey scene in chapter 12 where she would talk to jessy about how she was rejoining the ordo dracul. Seems like it should go before Antoinette and Jacks epiloguey scene. But i guess it'd just be like all those short stories you see in between books.
Chris
2018-06-09 03:59:27 +0000 UTC
