Medusa: Future romance scenes
Added 2018-07-23 13:20:32 +0000 UTCSpoilers for chapter 10! Don't read unless you've read chapter 10.
Spoilers:
You'll notice in chapter 10 I got quite close to an orgy. Our four main characters having sex with their better half, next to each other.
Darian/Chimera have no attraction to each other, Chimera/Medusa have very little to each other, and Darian/Otrera have only a little attraction to each other (and considering their past, sex between them would be awkward to say the least).
Medusa/Otrera on the other hand, have a lot. Otrera is built a lot like Darian, physically, and Otrera has a kink for otherworldy sex partners (werewolves, satyrs, and giants being the only ones I bothered mentioning). So the attraction between them is blatant. Purely sexual though.
My question for the readers is: would writing an orgy-like scene where Otrera and Medusa get involved with each other sexually be a bad fit for the story? Medusa and Darian love each other, and Chimera and Otrera have a romance budding. I could be undermining that by introducing some sexual contact between Medusa and Otrera, but on the other hand, I could introduce the sex innocently, where all four parties consent (and are involved).
Thoughts? Keep the sex between romantic partners, or venture into Otrera/Medusa territory a little?
Comments
Venture into the Oterna and Medusa romance a little
Patrick Callahan
2018-07-23 14:25:38 +0000 UTC