My Little Ventrue Pt.10 Ch.15 (Ch. 172)
Added 2023-05-17 19:59:31 +0000 UTCGetting closer! Not long now.
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The second half of this chapter kinda ran away from me, I think, and it ended up being a bit too wordy. A lot of important conversations and moments happening, and I wanted to make sure they were fully explored, but I think I overdid it and drew it out a bit too much. Agree? Y/N
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Noah Rocke
2023-05-18 02:02:43 +0000 UTCWowβ¦. Not too wordy in my opinion. They have half an hour to kill, why not talk? Everyone is trying to convince everyone else of their correctness. What a chapter!! Loved it. I donβt remember the last time I was on this many pins and needles for the next chapter.
Dan Kronjin
2023-05-17 21:45:30 +0000 UTC
