SamuKata
Urban
Urban

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From Locker Room to Lingerie

This story is purely fictional and created solely for entertainment purposes. However, I understand that some readers may find it offensive or hurtful. That was never my intention. I am now uncertain whether to continue or stop the story. Your feedback is important to me, and I appreciate your thoughts on how to proceed.

 

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I like this

Bryan

Hey

KINKY GODDESS

I never meant to suggest you drop the story. I was expressing my thoughts like others simply because you wrote about difficult aspects that need to be vetted. You go do you dear - not every story can be fluff nor happily ever after. I would mu h rather you rip emotions out and lay bare life's truths even ugly ones. It let's us appreciate the good and bad times for exactly what they are

Annah Rourke

I like your writing style but if your having a bad vib, let it go start a fresh story. Look forward to reading all your material, thanks for writing.

My Freeze

I like @BobbiN idea that the characters realize that they are acting exactly like the boy there trying to show the error of his ways by getting him in touch with his feminine side I’ve enjoyed most of your stories even the ones with younger characters in them or about them and I don’t mind stories with a dark side to them it’s just a fine line between a story with a dark side and a story that’s evil or comes across as vindictive We’ve all dealt with males and females who shouldn’t be allowed to be around people let alone in a position of power over others but we’ve dealt with it or gotten past it And I know how hard it is to write a story that you feel happy with so please keep going

Brett Schuhkraft

Got it! There are no minors in that story, so no worries there. I'll focus on completing stories with adult characters.

Urban

I hear you. People can be flawed, and stories like this reflect that. Growth and change are possible, but not everyone takes that path. I appreciate your perspective.

Urban

I'd like to see completion of stories with adult characters, such as *Are you trying to turn me into a sissy ". Personally, the recent run of stories with characters who are children/minors is not to my taste.

Robyn

While none of the characters are sympathetic, the story resonates with actual behaviors from real people. If the story concludes with some or all of the characters realizing their flaws and becoming better persons, it could serve as an object lesson.

BobbiN


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