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Added 2021-12-17 04:40:22 +0000 UTCI must go. My planet needs me.
Everyone is going to be so enraged on Monday when it cuts to the Peaceguard one last time, haha~
Comments
I swear you are just like my mom & I with being terminally critical of your work but I am used to it and undeterred! It's not just "not too bad", it's very good and not going unnoticed ♥ It's easy to get suckered into only talking about the story/dialogue/writing stuff when reading a graphic novel but the art is also top-notch quality stuff, believe you me. I'm sure your first (and second, and third) instinct will be to downplay this and think of all the things you are unsatisfied about in your art, but please re-read this until you can accept it. It's no empty gushing praise! I am not saying your art is perfect, it does have it's weaknesses about certain things like the readability of action at times (though I am only mentioning this because I feel you'll only accept praise if I use a reverse "shit sandwich" technique on you :P) but you are constantly improving – while also tackling by your lonesome very complex scenarios and scenes that'd give anyone trouble in the first place. Nobody is good at absolutely everything. You work your ass off on this comic and it shows, and I appreciate it so, so much. I am not art-ing much anymore from chronic arm injury & other issues, but I am aware of the staggering amount of work and love and craft you are putting in Unsounded. You have my utmost respect and admiration for that.
CelebrenIthil
2021-12-19 02:47:05 +0000 UTCThank you, Cel <3 I've been busting my butt with this chapter, it's good to hear it doesn't look too bad!
Ashley
2021-12-18 15:36:24 +0000 UTCI forgot to mention, I love how you rendered the hand in panel 7, Ashley, it really feels like it's thrumming with energy. The SLAM is also extremely satisfying, the sheer force of it is also communicated really well. I hope you can be proud at your craft in drawing these. And the bottom left two panels, well they just hurt my heart in the rightest of ways. ; v ;
CelebrenIthil
2021-12-17 23:10:30 +0000 UTCThank you for granting us the (bitter)sweet moment between those two I wished they could have had earlier ♡♡♡
CelebrenIthil
2021-12-17 13:56:48 +0000 UTC
