A Storm's Lullaby Page 140

Yep, these typos are breeding again..

Steve Lynx (Boulder)

In upper right panel, it should be: I think ‘that’ thunderstone... In lower left panel, it should be: Because ‘the’ Fizzlepop I know... Regardless, lovely page, but the suspense is killing me. I doubt Thistle alone can bring Tempest back. My bet is that Lullaby will need to step up and give some perspective to save the day. Only other thing I can say is that I hope you’ll follow the usual pattern of this story regarding immediate conflicts and this dark part won’t last long.

Double R Forrest

The perfect solution would be for her to see this is too good to be true; that dark magic can't possibly offer her anything good and it will change her. Get rid of it. Talk to Thistle. Reason with Fireweed. But of course, it would be too easy.

Sounds nice, but I expected something bit darker ^^'

But more so what would Tempest do? The faction she used to be a part of is completely gone now.

It could just be the reaction to Thistle's words, but there's something in that expression - cold and distant. That straight-lipped frown.

It's funny how quickly you see malice that was not there before. It's almost like you can immediately see the twisting. In the subtlety of the facial expressions. It's like she believes she is happy but is actually immediately becoming angry/bitter.

me in any case between the red aesthetic in a dark sky and the situation that reminds me of Dialga Primal in my favorite game: Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Explorer of the Sky. a legendary pokemon broken by darkness causes time to stop. I advise you to listen to the music of this fight it is a real pleasure. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-BetGF5ZdnU

Lux The Pegasus

She may only demolish a plank for the time being, but Thistle concern is that she is using dark magic to do so - and worries that it might affect her mind. The suspicion that is immediately confirmed.

Thank you :)

I love this red color that dominates the page. on the other hand, I am not convinced by Thistle's speech. Tempest has only demolished a plank for the time being. even if it is weak. its going badly

Lux The Pegasus

oooo thats an amazing Page I have to admit! Can't wait for the next

Bastian810