A Storm's Lullaby Page 182 Inks

drag Rusty to where? they are lost. I think Tempest is more likely to wear it when it hits it.

Lux The Pegasus

I don't even think the timberwolf is looking for other deadwood to replenish their bodies. I think there is rather a pack not far away.

Lux The Pegasus

Is that the same Timberwolf from before? Some creatrues just don’t know when to quit.

NTG

Don’t tell me Lullaby’s going to have drag both Rusty and Tempest out of the woods herself by the end of this.

Double R Forrest

We had one - when she found out Rusty hurt Lulu.

Thank you! Panel 2 was meant to be a kind of "getting ready" stance. But indeed one panel of transition is missing because of lack of space...

It charged on her so there was no time to use the horn from a distance.

I do hope we'll get a mother bear scene. Where Tempest stands her ground and actually the Timberwolf backs off. Real wolves actually do that, if you stand your ground they won't attack. Though that is also because they are animals and not monsters. They won't risk attacking something that's going to fight back unless they have no other choice. With Granny's flashback the timberwolves were scared off by loud noise which is also the case with real wolves. They are looking for weak prey that will run and hide. Making loud noises and posing is the opposite of that. It also would make sense within the story as Lullaby standing her ground made the Timberwolf hesitate despite her being so small.

Also a really good pose on Tempest kicking. Though you kind of didn't include a panel of how she got into that pose. Maybe zooming it out a little further to show what her body is doing. The aftermath though does have Tempest's wound opening up again which is good. Keep her injury consistent and at attention so that it doesn't become an afterthought.

I'm hoping for a real badass mother bear moment. Maybe even Tempest staring down the timberwolf and it not fighting. That she will defend her daughter and she is not afraid to get hurt. Also she's not hiding it from Lullaby. Tempest is a warrior and if Lullaby can't deal with that then she can't be her mommy to begin with. Action is unfortunately just not your biggest strength so I actually think a staredown would be better. It also would make things make more sense if the timberwolves are intimidated by Tempest so they will leave the house alone.

If I didn't know any better i would say somepony is getting dizzy!

one-one-one SHOT you can feel the difficulty with Lullaby and Rusty who are two on ten pages for le vincre. Tempest just two plan the timberwolf fucked them up. I would surely have used her horn for the vincre from a distance she would not have needed this return to hit.

Lux The Pegasus