So I do wanna have a real art talk with you guys
Added 2025-10-28 03:00:23 +0000 UTCLately Ive been feeling like my art hasnt been up to snuff. I feel like im lacking in a lot of departments that I shouldnt be and a lot of my pics, colors, poses, etc are a little too samey and lack the oomph they used to have.
I was wondering what you guys thought of my art lately. Anything honest helps, whether you like it, think its better, think its worse, or just have thoughts <3
I promise it wont hurt my feelings and i'm always in the mood for feedback!
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aw thank you! Yeah i think ive been trying to practice anatomy for so long that I kind of forgot to go back to "better" stuff lol
backstreetgirl
2025-10-31 01:23:00 +0000 UTCI really liked the last cover drawing with its great use of light and shadow, as well as the steamy breath. It's very high quality and very striking, even sexually suggestive, which immediately attracted me. I agree that the poses, while it's beautiful to see those little girls showing off their lovely bodies, I wish they were a bit more intense. For example, instead of just standing or lying down nude, we could see their vaginas or anuses open. Your bio says you're from Japan. You should be proud that your art is so good that I, a simple Latino living on the other side of the world, have become a fan and a big follower of yours.
Leornad1984
2025-10-31 00:27:50 +0000 UTCI agree!
backstreetgirl
2025-10-29 04:10:16 +0000 UTCYeah I agree! I think Iβve been focusing too much on trying poses that I havnt been doing much particularly sexy lol
backstreetgirl
2025-10-29 04:10:07 +0000 UTCI get what you mean. I think itβs mainly just showing off the bods instead of having stuff happen. But otherwise Iβve been liking everything
Azura
2025-10-28 12:17:51 +0000 UTCSome more hardcore stuff would be good. As much as I like the poses, the hardcore stuff helps put myself in there
Foot Man
2025-10-28 08:27:01 +0000 UTCThankies! Yeah I suck at hands SO much but yeah I wanna do more poses
backstreetgirl
2025-10-28 05:29:36 +0000 UTCAw thank you! I started doing text because I couldnt do context well so my dialogue grew with my art so much that I never considered not using it haha. Thank you bunches
backstreetgirl
2025-10-28 05:28:43 +0000 UTCI agree with the samey poses, it seems that you have been in a comfort zone on those and need to expand into other ones (as much as I like those laying down tummy and feet up). What I think you started going towards was a "show don't tell" with the pokemon girls and mom on the back or the family bet, I think you can create scenes and situations that convey the horny and work with the text much better, or even don't need the text at all. I feel you could work more towards that path for greater impact. I do think your colors and general style is great, I understand its harder but when you do those big shadows that say "this is hidden" it amplifies the whole thing.
Moffumeito π
2025-10-28 05:13:40 +0000 UTCThe last few have looked great, you don't really need to do anything crazy with them, they all look at least like there finished, I've had a few lately were it's no colour and looks like a sketch and they call it finished.
Red
2025-10-28 04:29:31 +0000 UTCLove your artstyle and especially your captions, though I do agree with the comments about trying different poses. Personally I would love to see more backside views.
SissyboyAlex
2025-10-28 04:06:40 +0000 UTCWell besides the fingers and toes issues on occasion, am a fan of the itty plump bods, and your captions been getting especially hot AF lately (definately shoot loads a couple of times from them). Otherwise could check out different poses as reference and try quick sketches, see if it clicks with you.
Deathscytheful
2025-10-28 03:23:34 +0000 UTCBest recommendation is to try drawing motion. Like swinging on a swing or climbing a tree
Kumatose
2025-10-28 03:10:04 +0000 UTC
