Updated Newlife 0.4.22

Hi, I'll add a few lines for baby-crazy and the no-pill vow. The main check there is the trying-for-baby status which gets set by the relevant vows. I intend at some point to add a new "important talk" topic and an npc-initiated scene that lets this be set outside of the vows.

Splendid Ostrich

Typo: "Offer to reward him" (post mugging scene) *** Nathaniel takes you by the hand, and leads you deeper into the alleyway. In the middle of the alley, where it's so dark that you can barely make out more than his silhouette, you step into his arms. *** Double-space between "that you can" and "barely make out"

Saur

Typo/Wordiness?: 2nd "Throw friend under the bus + sex event" *** They dismount, leaving her slumped on the ground, gasping for breath, her pert tits rising and falling as she gasps for breath, chest heaving. The men laugh and high-five each other. You remember another friend starting a romance like this, but that won't happen again. The thug who got her off is celebrating their erotic success with the others, Nevaeh abandoned forgotten on the ground. Perhaps he might fuck her someday, but he clearly isn't the sort for kisses and cuddles. *** Following "The thug who got her off is celebrating their erotic success with the others," ... Consider: "leaving PCFriend abandoned on the ground." or "leaving PCFriend forgotten on the ground." To keep the original format, you would probably want to add a semicolon. ex) "The thug who got her off is celebrating their erotic success with the others; Nevaeh abandoned, forgotten on the ground." However, I don't think that extensive semi-colon use matches the writing style present in newlife, and I'm tempted to recommended reversing the other semi-colon edit I made as a result of that. I suggest using one of the first two options if possible.

Saur

Consistency: Maternal PCs & Pregnancy Discovery Dialogue *** You spend the rest of the evening daydreaming about sitting with Isaac, resting against him as you cradle your newborn, warm and comfortable with his masculine arm wrapped around your shoulders. Thinking about it makes you feel happy, and even if this wasn't exactly planned you feel it might all be for the best. *** Maternal PCs who are in love ask their partners to give them children ("Ask him to come inside," "Talk sexy to him," etc.), as do NPCs in love who want kids (via "Cup his Balls," random dialogue, etc.). The generic pregnancy discovery dialogue seems to suggest that pregnancy is always an accident, which is not the case for either group. Can this dialogue be revisited for Maternal PCs and regular PCs after an NPC has requested children? I suspect you may have to make a new flag... P.S. I think Baby-Crazy PCs have variant dialogue here, but I can't remember of the top off my head.

Saur

Style/Phrasing: Bring Virgin Coworker Sex w/ friend *** Rayyan looks up at Lilly and tells her that he took your virginity too and he hopes that one-day she'll bring a virgin friend of hers to him for deflowering too. _____________________ *** The sentence "works," technically, but it's a bit of a run on and uses "too" twice in the same manner. A cleaner revision might be: "Rayyan looks up at Lilly and tells her that he also took your virginity and that he hopes that, one day, she will bring him a virgin friend for deflowering too."

Saur

Thanks Saur! The boss' line in your 2nd comment is chosen randomly from the eligible options in a list of possible things to say so you won't always get the virginity-loss one - also, it's limited to bosses with the likes_cute trait. The "moan in his arms" line is unlocked by having had sex with a boss who has the passionate-lover trait. "Cotton on" is an idiom, apparently a British one (<a href="https://www.collinsdictionary.com/dictionary/english/cotton-on)" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://www.collinsdictionary.com/dictionary/english/cotton-on)</a> And sorry for making you report that last one twice - I think I'd been reading the wrong line (the one directly above "You're pressed..." which was correct) and thinking I'd fixed it already. In fact the erroneous one was earlier in that if-statement and I'd been overlooking it.

Splendid Ostrich

Thanks. There's a check for the "trying for baby" status (set by the various "have kids" vows) but not for no-contraception ones. You're right that the guys shouldn't exactly be surprised in those situations. I'll have a look over it for hte next version.

Splendid Ostrich

Hi, I'm not seeing any bugs there - a test custom character correctly generated as Muscular ("a broad, powerful chest" in his description). That's with a yml custom character with a unique name to make him recognisable and the psychic cheat to see him in the relationship browser at game-start.

Splendid Ostrich

There's one for when you hit maximum love for your partner at a level below LOVE. There's another for romantic characters who are in love but haven't seen him for a while. Crush dream for unmarried/un-engaged romantic characters. Bastard decision scene is if a character reaches the cap on bastard points.

Splendid Ostrich

Typo: Wall Orgasm *** Owen's aggressive thrusts reach a frantic climax, his fingers digging into your hips, the pleasure driving you almost out of your mind as his erect cock stimulates you. You're pressed against the wall as he lunges to his full length into you, and his swollen member throbs inside you. *** Double space before "You're pressed against the wall." I found this one i the last update too. Did it sneak through in the giant text wall?

Saur

Typo (?) Sex with boyfriend's jerk friend *** You catch your breath, praying that Joel won't have cottoned on. *** Is "cottoned on" supposed to be "caught on?" I've never seen that phrase used before/

Saur

Typo: Cunnilingus (feel breasts) *** You knead your heavy breasts, the pressure of your fingers against your supple flesh adding to the stimulation from what Carlos' doing down below. *** "npcName doing down" should be "npcName is doing down."

Saur

Typo: Wall Sex Orgasm *** Your body responds with wild abandon as your orgasm hits. You buck your hips frantically against Max, arching your body back against the wall and clutching at him with your hands. *** Double-space between "against the" and "wall."

Saur

Bug: "Open your top" suggests lactation when not pregnant *** You slowly unbutton your pink top, eager to give Sebastian better access to your sensitive breasts. Bit by bit, the smooth tanned skin beneath is revealed: your flat stomach and the bare breasts above it, swollen larger than usual with milk. *** The PC was a virgin and not pregnant when this text triggered.

Saur

A flaw in logic: When the PC agrees to go without the pill or condoms when marrying an NPC who dislikes children, and the PC gets pregnant, the NPC reacts like this: "Rob breaks into an mocking grin, but it seems forced somehow, as if he isn't sure he means it. He hesitates, and the smile fades and is replaced with an uncertain expression. He slumps onto a seat and looks up at you. "I knew I was going to knock you up", he says, "but what do I do now?"" && "Then, he apologises for reacting badly to the news. He tells you that even though this was a big shock to him, if he was destined to get someone pregnant by accident he's glad it turned out to be a sweet girl like you. " At the point where you're married and has asked the PC to be off the pill and never ask for a condom, pregnancy ceases to be an accident. Can you work the question of marriage into the NPCs reaction in this instance? And the promises made when marrying?

Saint Destiny

Typo: Husband leaves angrily after confessing infidelity *** With nothing further to say, Bernardwalks out, taking quick angry steps, probably to pend a night away from home sharing his woes with a friend. *** Needs a space between "npcName" and "walks out."

Saur

How do the new events fire?

Secondarian

Typo: Boss comments on taking PC's virginity *** Then Bernard rests a hand on your leg and gives it an intimate squeeze. He tells you that he loved popping your cherry and he's going to really enjoy your next time. *** Double-space between "popping" and "your cherry"

Saur

Consistency: Sleazy (?) Boss flirts with PC after electro-couch event *** Then Bernard rests a hand on your leg and gives it an intimate squeeze. He tells you that he's looking forward to hearing you moan in his arms again. *** If the PC loses her virginity to her Jerk boss during the "electro-couch" event, the Jerk boss does not comment on "popping [the PC's] cherry" and uses default dialogue instead.

Saur

The muscular npcs are generated as toned

REVISION MEGATHREAD Last Updated: 9/24 Typo: Stop taking the pill *** You nod, a little awkwardly as you're quite frightened at the thought of risking pregnancy. Taking a deep breath, you toss the pills aside and smile up at Lucas. He grins, surprised and please, and his hands go to your waist. As his powerful fingers caress your flanks you wonder nervously if they'll soon be caressing a midriff that's swelling with pregnancy. *** "surprised and please" should be "surprised and pleased."

Saur