Hi-Fi Rush: Mostly (h)Armless page (15/?)
Added 2023-06-06 21:18:01 +0000 UTC20 minutes...
The whole comic lasts about 30-35 minutes in real time. 10 of those have already passed. We're running on a tight schedule here. But we're almost done setting up the promised confrontation. All the game rules have been laid down, foreshadowing seeds planted. There's just one more thing to add to the mix...
Also something about that empty couch in the hideout gives me anxiety.
Comments
Thank you! I’ve been making comics for a long time so most of this stuff comes to me quite naturally. It’s quite easy to guess what could still be a significant game changer in this situation. Something about Chai…
Xannador
2023-06-09 08:13:56 +0000 UTCI guess even Chai can put two and two together if you put a proverbial gun to his head. Thanks though!
Xannador
2023-06-08 20:31:55 +0000 UTCHive mind moment. Those eyes on KEM-N0’s and the other’s eyes are especially creepy now with the gritty, charcoal-like, lines. And oh? What this? Chai deducing something with his brain??!! Blasphemous!
Lysander Croix
2023-06-08 01:03:51 +0000 UTCAw yes! The tension (and my excitement) is growing with each new page, you do a really great job! I'm not really familiar with storyboarding and comic pacing, but it all feels so natural and it is such a treat to read! What I can praise more substantially is the art though, I love the color contrast between the museum and the hideout and the linework on the robots (especially the big baddie), the eyes not being defined by solid lines looks great! I like the emphasized depth in the upper half of the page too, with the rim lighting and framing. KEM-N0's prism looks awfully spectra-like though, and I have no clue how Chai will handle Z-Shielding without Macaron around. (Maybe *this* time reasoning will work!) Mac carrying CNMN is a cute addition, and the added detail of Peppermint putting her blaster away when she's running is nice too, they're definitely in a hurry! I have no clue what else you're going to add as things look pretty dire as they are, but I'm excited to see what's coming!
Angel
2023-06-07 01:07:18 +0000 UTC
